Feed back sessions

Today we had our usual feedback sessions, but today instead of brain storming out own projects we had to brain storm other peoples projects.

I was given the project Hook Line and Stinker which is about a father taking his son on a fishing trip in hope to reform their bond which has been damaged but a hidous mermaid comes on board and the two have to work together.

Whilst I was watching their animatic and writing down ideas and other feedback they were watching my animatic and writing down their feed back. When writing the feedback we had to pretend that we had never seen each other animatics and watch it with fresh eyes.

So here is their feedback.



Infinitus Artificium.


Music

• Sound effects
• footsteps
• echo to enhance space
• build

Timing/pace

• Varied to clarify narrative
• too slow

Narrative

• Either PUSH narrative or REMOVE and turn into pure dance
• Alternative narrative
• - Woman too fight back
• - Other relationships
• - twist with characters interaction
• - establishing their relationship

Characters

• Relationship between characters
• - More contrast between characters male/female could be more dynamic
• - Levels and plane showing high variation between characters
• - Their mediums to leave trails

Style

• Explore different mediums
• More experimental
• Marks made by medium portray character/emotion

Background

• Black?
• Texture
• environment made by other art forms
• would characters intereact with environment

Camera angles

• Push angles
• cut timing
• use cuts to add drama
• Staged- looks like theatre...is this what you want?
• depth
• distant camera